Friday, August 03, 2007

I miss you......


I miss the sound of your laughter
I miss the way you would look at the drinks I gave you and ask if you'd get drunk
I miss the sound of my phone going off
I miss your messages of love and warmth
I miss the sound of your voice
I miss sitting in the garden on summer evenings with you
I miss visiting you
I miss buying you presents and being able to spoil you
I miss the way you enlightened my life
I miss even having to remind you to take your tablets - though you hated them
I miss the way you make me feel wanted
I miss you because I know you'd understand what I am going thru right now
But
most of all
I miss the way you loved me

8 comments:

Arti Honrao said...

This is so touching!



GBU
Arti

whispers said...

arti. its only touching as i was touched by a great lady.

thank you x

floots said...

those last three lines sum it up perfectly
thank you

whispers said...

floots thank you :)

Alok said...

i agree with floots ....

I am filled with a sense of loss that cannot be defined

alok

whispers said...

Alok

I am filled with a sense of loss that cannot be defined

So am I

dsnake1 said...

like floots said, those last 3 lines sums up the poem perfectly. a very touching piece here.

hi, it's my first time here, hope you don't mind me commenting on an older post, but i really have to say something about this work. :)

whispers said...

dsnake1

So glad you have stopped by, please feel free to comment on anything - even if to say what I wrote is rubbish.
An honest comment is worth a thousand praises

xx