Friday, November 03, 2006

Pain

Hot pooling tears
Spill
From
Her eyes

She sits
In
Pain

Every moment
She
Makes

Causes
Discomfort

Purple
Blue
Red
Black

The colours
Bloom
Over
Her body

She stands up
Wiping the tears
From
Her
Eyes

And wonders
Is it
Worth
Saving this
Relationship

5 comments:

Pat Paulk said...

No relationship worth that kind of pain. Pearl of a poem though!!!

jel said...

I agree with Pat here!


take care

trinitystar said...

Anything that come between your spirit or anyones spirit. The relationship is not worth pain ... for it is no good for the soul.
Hugs for you.
:o)
think I came here via Pat's

temppixie said...

Feel your pain sister! No bloke is worthy of you if this is how he makes you feel. Get your girls round, open a bottle(or 2) of voddy, and put those records on that make you howl, ( whilst holding a hairbrush!) yes the original I will survive, but try Francis Black, works for me.Hang on in there, you have to kis many a frog to find your prince.

whispers said...

TO ALL

I wrote this in my 'book' where I write things first during the summer.

I will share a little of my back ground i think as Inever blog things in order but as I am ready to share things with u all


It wasn't easy sharing this piece.
Thank you all for you love, hugs and concern

God Bless you all xx